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2013-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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In old days, I liked to go shopping. But nowadays I don’t like to go shopping. I feel tired easily during shopping. So I usually buy something using internet except clothes. When I buy clothes, I usually go to the outlet because I can buy good clothes on much discounted price.

강사 첨삭

Hi there!^^ You were really able to construct good sentences. You made minor mistakes but that is okay. I agree that shopping through the internet saves much of your energy. Keep up the good work. Take care! ~Teacher Chloe~ In old days, I liked to go shopping. >>In the old days, I liked to go shopping. But nowadays I don’t like to go shopping. >>CORRECT OR:don\'t I feel tired easily during shopping. >>CORRECT So I usually buy something using internet except clothes. >>So I usually buy something using the internet except for clothes. When I buy clothes, I usually go to the outlet because I can buy good clothes on much discounted price. >>CORRECT

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