Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In old days, I liked to go shopping. But nowadays I don’t like to go shopping. I feel tired easily during shopping. So I usually buy something using internet except clothes.
When I buy clothes, I usually go to the outlet because I can buy good clothes on much discounted price.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!^^
You were really able to construct good sentences. You made minor mistakes but that is okay.
I agree that shopping through the internet saves much of your energy.
Keep up the good work. Take care!
~Teacher Chloe~
In old days, I liked to go shopping.
>>In the old days, I liked to go shopping.
But nowadays I don’t like to go shopping.
>>CORRECT
OR:don\'t
I feel tired easily during shopping.
>>CORRECT
So I usually buy something using internet except clothes.
>>So I usually buy something using the internet except for clothes. When I buy clothes, I usually go to the outlet because I can buy good clothes on much discounted price.
>>CORRECT
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