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I'll change some way of studying. The korea right now is getting more competitive. I don't like that way of studying. my mom told me that harvard University wants to make cooperation person not competitive person. The study getting hard because of competitive studying way. I feel tired.I will make new way of studying.ㅠㅠ

A brilliant Wednesday to you Tom! Thank you for sending me an essay today. How are you? I think you ate a delicious snack today, am I right? I enjoyed reading it because you were able to express your ideas in a nice way. Wonderful! Try to use new ways in studying your lessons. We can talk more about this later in class. I hope that you are doing great today and happy. Please go over the corrections below and if you have any question just raise it in class. See you! Enjoy your day! Teacher Nina   I\'ll change some way of studying. >> I\'ll change my way of studying. >> OR: I\'ll change my study habits.The korea right now is getting more competitive. >> It is becoming more competitive in Korea these days.I don\'t like that way of studying. >> Correct >> OR: I don\'t like that method of studying.my mom told me that harvard University wants to make cooperation person not competitive person. >> My mom told me that at Harvard University it teaches a person to cooperate well not to be competitive. >> OR: My mom told me that being cooperative not being competitive is the method in studying at Harvard University.The study getting hard because of competitive studying way. >> Did you mean: The lessons are becoming hard because of the competitve way of studying. >> OR: Studying is becoming difficult because of the being a competitive person.I feel tired. >> Correct! I will make new way of studying.ㅠㅠ >> I will make a new way to study. >> OR: I will make a new method for me to study hard. >> OR: I will find a new strategy in studying hard that will be good for me.