Homework

2013-10-23 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

(Homework) 1.How long 2.How often 3.How much 4.How well 5.How much 6.How long 7.How often 8.How well 9.How often 10.How long Hi, Nina~ The weather in korea was little hot, but very good ^^ I ate steak to department store and there is progress that Halloween Event!! So we were played very fun!! make some pumpkin candle and take photo!! Oh!! we ate some fortune cookies~(my first fortune cookies, it is so delicious and very good phrase here that) Nina~ take care and rug up ^^ Bye bye~ see you tomorrow~!!

강사 첨삭

A wonderful evening to you Annabel^^ I am glad that you enjoyed your day! Your story made me feel better. You did an awesome job with your homework. Please review the answer of number 6 and 10. ^^ I was surprised! You used an idiomatic expressions which means to wrap yourself for feel warm.^^ I am so proud of you!!! Please continue doing your best and you will be able to claim it in the future. See you tomorrow! Can\'t wait to talk to you again! I love eating fortune cookies.^^ We can talk more about this topic in class. Good night! Thanks for your concern! Take Care! Teacher Nina   (Homework)1.How long >> Correct! 2.How often >> Correct! 3.How much >> Correct! 4.How well >> Correct! 5.How much >> Correct!6.How long >> how much 7.How often >> Correct! 8.How well >> Correct! 9.How often >> Correct! 10.How long >> How muchHi, Nina~ >> Correct! The weather in korea was little hot, but very good ^^ >> The weather in Korea was a little hot and good. >> OR: The weather in Korea was a bit hot and good as well.I ate steak to department store and there is progress that Halloween Event!! >> Did you mean: I ate steak, went to the department store and there was an activity, a Halloween event! >> OR: I ate steak and went to the department store. There was a Halloween event there.So we were played very fun!! make some pumpkin candle and take photo!! >> Did you mean: So we played and it was very fun! We made a pumpkin candle holder and took photos. >> OR: We played some games and it was really fun! We made a pumpkin candle holder and took some photos.Oh!! we ate some fortune cookies~(my first fortune cookies, it is so delicious and very good phrase here that) >> Correct! ( My fortune cookie was so delicious and there was a very good saying in it.) >> OR: Correct! ( The fortune cookie I ate was delicious and the saying was really good.)Nina~ take care and rug up ^^ Bye bye~ see you tomorrow~!! >> Correct!

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