homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.b
2.b
3.b
4.a
5.a
6.a
7.a
8.b
9.b
10.a
Today, I will eat salmon. Salmon is loaded with Vitamin D.
And Salmon contains plenty of good protain.
So I like Salmon. Today, I will enjoy the smoked Salmon.Also I will enjoy the sushi.
강사 첨삭
Fantastic Thursday Tom!
How is your week going? Are you having fun today?
How was your day? I am sure that you learned a lot of things in school today.
Wow! I like to eat smoked salmon too! It is really delicious.
I am so happy with your performance these days.
You are doing great but don\'t forget to go over the corrections I give you in class.
Strive harder. See you!
Teacher Nina
1.b
>> A
2.b
>> CORRECT! 3.b
>> CORRECT! 4.a
>> CORRECT! 5.a
>> CORRECT! 6.a
>> B7.a
>> CORRECT! 8.b
>> CORRECT! 9.b
>> CORRECT! 10.a
>> CORRECT! Today, I will eat salmon.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'m going to eat salmon today.
Salmon is loaded with Vitamin D.
>> CORRECT!
>> Better: Salmon is rich with Vitamin D.And Salmon contains plenty of good protain.
>> And salmon contains plenty of good protein. ( Spelling check: protein ^^)
>> OR: And salmon contains a lot of protein.So I like Salmon.
>> CORRECT!
Today, I will enjoy the smoked Salmon.
>> I will enjoy smoked salmon today.
>> OR: I will enjoy eating smoked salmon today.
Also I will enjoy the sushi.
>> I will also enjoy sushi.
>> OR: I\'m gloing to enjoy sushi too.
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