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2013-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.b 3.b 4.a 5.a 6.a 7.a 8.b 9.b 10.a Today, I will eat salmon. Salmon is loaded with Vitamin D. And Salmon contains plenty of good protain. So I like Salmon. Today, I will enjoy the smoked Salmon.Also I will enjoy the sushi.

강사 첨삭

Fantastic Thursday Tom! How is your week going? Are you having fun today? How was your day? I am sure that you learned a lot of things in school today. Wow! I like to eat smoked salmon too! It is really delicious. I am so happy with your performance these days. You are doing great but don\'t forget to go over the corrections I give you in class. Strive harder. See you! Teacher Nina   1.b >> A 2.b >> CORRECT! 3.b >> CORRECT! 4.a >> CORRECT! 5.a >> CORRECT! 6.a >> B7.a >> CORRECT! 8.b >> CORRECT! 9.b >> CORRECT! 10.a >> CORRECT! Today, I will eat salmon. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I\'m going to eat salmon today. Salmon is loaded with Vitamin D. >> CORRECT! >> Better: Salmon is rich with Vitamin D.And Salmon contains plenty of good protain. >> And salmon contains plenty of good protein. ( Spelling check: protein ^^) >> OR: And salmon contains a lot of protein.So I like Salmon. >> CORRECT! Today, I will enjoy the smoked Salmon. >> I will enjoy smoked salmon today. >> OR: I will enjoy eating smoked salmon today. Also I will enjoy the sushi. >> I will also enjoy sushi. >> OR: I\'m gloing to enjoy sushi too.

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