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2013-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I will choose Steven Spielberg. I really,really like Steven Speilberg as a director. He is a famous director.And he is still alive. I love his movie. He's movies are jurassic park and E.T

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Happy Friday Tom! Are you excited for the weekend? How are your fishes?  Do you have any special plans for tonight? Oh! I love the movie titled \"Jurassic Park\" too.  The movies were wonderful. I gave you the synonyms (same word meaning) of the word famous. I really want to help you improve your vocabulary skills.  Please go over the corrections below. We can talk more about this topic later in class. See you! Have a nice day! Teacher NIna   I will choose Steven Spielberg. >> Correct! >> OR: If I could have a conversation with a famous person I will choose Steven Spielberg.I really,really like Steven Speilberg as a director. >> I really like Steven Spielberg as a director. >> OR: I really like him as a director.He is a famous director. >> Correct! >> OR: He is a well known director. >> OR: He is a prominent director. And he is still alive. >> Correct!I love his movie. >> Correct! >> OR: I love his movies. He\'s movies are jurassic park and E.T >> His movies are titled \"Jurassic Park\" and \"E.T.\" >> OR: The movies he made are titled \"Jurassic Park\" and \" Extra Terrestial\".

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