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2013-10-26 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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<compositon> Hello? Jun. I heard your voice message. I’m glad that you are coming to my home. What do you want to do at my home? I like to watch TV shows with some snacks and drinking. What time will you arrive? Could you call me when you get on the subway? I will wait. See you later. I’d like to move to Bangbae-Dong. I like a new apartment with modern style. I want the apartment to be near the subway station. I hope that the house price is under a billion won. I had to clean my room when I was a child. I used to wash the dishes if my mom was out. I sometimes cooked the dishes for my younger sister. My responsibility in my home was to take care of my younger sister when my mom was out. I made a fired egg for her. It was the dish that I first cooked. My younger sister and I enjoyed it.

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Hi there! Happy Friday. I\'m sure you\'re very happy because it\'s Friday. I can say that you are really learning in our class. Keep working. You will soon reap what you sow. I mean, everything that happens to you is a result of your own actions so strive more. Let us not be carried out by the thought of having a good time. Meanwhile, let us finish our work so that we will have a meaningful weekend.  Have a great weekend! T. Chloe Hello? Jun. I heard your voice message. >>Hello Jun! I heard your voice message. I’m glad that you are coming to my home. >>I\'m glad that you are coming home. What do you want to do at my home? >> What do you want to do at home? I like to watch TV shows with some snacks and drinking. >>I\'d like to watch TV show while having snacks and drinks. What time will you arrive? >>CORRECT Could you call me when you get on the subway? >>Could you call me when you get in the subway? I will wait. See you later. >> I will wait you. See you later. >>I will wait for you. See you later. I’d like to move to Bangbae-Dong. >>CORRECT I like a new apartment with modern style. >>I like a new apartment with a modern style. >>I like a new and modernized apartment. I want the apartment to be near the subway station. >>CORRECT >>I want an apartment nearby the subway station. I hope that the house price is under a billion won. >>I hope that the house price is below billion won. I had to clean my room when I was a child. >>CORRECT >>I used to clean my room when I was a child. I used to wash the dishes if my mom was out.>>I used to wash the dishes when my mom is out. I sometimes cooked the dishes for my younger sister. >>I also used to cook the dishes for my younger sister. My responsibility in my home was to take care of my younger sister when my mom was out. >>My responsibility at home was to  take care of my younger sister when my mom is  out. I made a fired egg for her. >> I used to cook fried eggs for her. >>I used to cook her fried eggs. It was the dish that I first cooked. >>It is the first dish I cooked. >>It is the dish I first cooked.   My younger sister and I enjoyed it. >>CORRECT >>We enjoyed it.

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