Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Hello? Jun. I heard your voice message. I’m glad that you are coming to my home.
What do you want to do at my home? I like to watch TV shows with some snacks and drinking.
What time will you arrive? Could you call me when you get on the subway?
I will wait. See you later.
I’d like to move to Bangbae-Dong. I like a new apartment with modern style.
I want the apartment to be near the subway station.
I hope that the house price is under a billion won.
I had to clean my room when I was a child. I used to wash the dishes if my mom was out.
I sometimes cooked the dishes for my younger sister. My responsibility in my home was to take care of my younger sister when my mom was out. I made a fired egg for her. It was the dish that I first cooked. My younger sister and I enjoyed it.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Happy Friday. I\'m sure you\'re very happy because it\'s Friday. I can say that you are really learning in our class. Keep working. You will soon reap what you sow. I mean, everything that happens to you is a result of your own actions so strive more. Let us not be carried out by the thought of having a good time. Meanwhile, let us finish our work so that we will have a meaningful weekend. Have a great weekend!
T. Chloe
Hello? Jun. I heard your voice message.
>>Hello Jun! I heard your voice message.
I’m glad that you are coming to my home.
>>I\'m glad that you are coming home.
What do you want to do at my home?
>> What do you want to do at home?
I like to watch TV shows with some snacks and drinking.
>>I\'d like to watch TV show while having snacks and drinks.
What time will you arrive?
>>CORRECT
Could you call me when you get on the subway?
>>Could you call me when you get in the subway?
I will wait. See you later.
>> I will wait you. See you later.
>>I will wait for you. See you later.
I’d like to move to Bangbae-Dong.
>>CORRECT
I like a new apartment with modern style.
>>I like a new apartment with a modern style.
>>I like a new and modernized apartment.
I want the apartment to be near the subway station.
>>CORRECT
>>I want an apartment nearby the subway station.
I hope that the house price is under a billion won.
>>I hope that the house price is below billion won.
I had to clean my room when I was a child.
>>CORRECT
>>I used to clean my room when I was a child.
I used to wash the dishes if my mom was out.>>I used to wash the dishes when my mom is out.
I sometimes cooked the dishes for my younger sister.
>>I also used to cook the dishes for my younger sister.
My responsibility in my home was to take care of my younger sister when my mom was out.
>>My responsibility at home was to take care of my younger sister when my mom is out.
I made a fired egg for her.
>> I used to cook fried eggs for her.
>>I used to cook her fried eggs.
It was the dish that I first cooked.
>>It is the first dish I cooked.
>>It is the dish I first cooked.
My younger sister and I enjoyed it.
>>CORRECT
>>We enjoyed it.
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