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2013-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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1) This is a nice cat. It's much _____ than my friend's cat. -> better 2) Here is Emily. She's six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is _____ . -> older 3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the _____ exercise on the worksheet. -> more difficult 4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the _____ hobby in the world. -> most interesting 5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even _____ one last weekend. -> better <compositon> When I dine out, I usually go to beef restaurant with my friends. We like beef dishes very much. But beef is so expensive in Korea. We consider the good price for taste. I like clean restaurant, especially the restroom has to be clean. I like pop ballad and dance music. Ballad is more soft and romantic than dance music. I usually listen to ballad music when I take a rest. Dance music is more exciting than ballad. So,I listen to dance music when I want to feel better.

강사 첨삭

Ma\'am Eun Young! It is INCREDIBLE! I must tell you that your English writing skill is very impressive. I checked your composition and it is very obvious that you were able to construct good and grammatically correct sentences. Good job! That calls for a celebration. I think you don\'t really have to be nervous for your OPIC exam because you have just proven to me that you can use the English language well.  EXCELLENT!   I will call you again on Monday Ma\'am.  Make an ace in your exam. YOU CAN DO IT. AJA!   -Teacher Chloe  1) This is a nice cat. It\'s much _____ than my friend\'s cat. -> better >>Correct!2) Here is Emily. She\'s six years old. Her brother is nine, so he is _____ . -> older >>Correct!3) This is a difficult exercise. But the exercise with an asterisk (*) is the _____ exercise on the worksheet. -> more difficult >>most difficult 4) He has an interesting hobby, but my sister has the _____ hobby in the world. -> most interesting >>Correct!5) In the last holidays I read a good book, but father gave me an even _____ one last weekend.-> better>>Correct!<compositon>When I dine out, I usually go to beef restaurant with my friends. >>Correct!We like beef dishes very much. >>Correct! But beef is so expensive in Korea. >>Correct! >>But beef is very expensive in our country. We consider the good price for taste. >>Correct! I like clean restaurant, especially the restroom has to be clean.>>Correct!I like pop ballad and dance music. >>Correct! Ballad is more soft and romantic than dance music. >>Correct! I usually listen to ballad music when I take a rest. >>Correct!Dance music is more exciting than ballad. >>Correct!So,I listen to dance music when I want to feel better. >>Correct! (You have to put a space between \"So and I\" in the sentence)

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