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2013-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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If there is no rule and people can do everything whatever they want, people will use transportation as free. They will go to any restaurant and eat every food what they want. I will pick up some food from grocery and I will go to shopping mall. Then I will get every expensive bags, shoes and clothes. Even I can go abroad without flight ticket.

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Good morning once again, Emily!~ Wow, you are going to do a lot of things when there are no rules anymore!~ Don\'t you want to travel around the world for free? Well, in my own opinion, probably, there would be chaos around us if it happened. Let\'s talk more of this tomorrow!~ See you!~~~Teacher Erine~~   If there is no rule and people can do everything whatever they want, people will use transportation as free. >>If there are no rules and people can do whatever they want, people will use any transportation for free. They will go to any restaurant and eat every food what they want. >>They will go any restaurant and eat whatever food they want. I will pick up some food from grocery and I will go to shopping mall. >>I will pick up some food from a grocery and will to to a shopping mall. Then I will get every expensive bags, shoes and clothes. >>Correct. Even I can go abroad without flight ticket. >>I can even go abroad without a flight ticket.(We don\'t usually start a sentence with \"even\".)

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