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2013-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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What are your expectations for our English classes? above all, I expect that i can improve English skill with new teacher, Alice! I have taken a test named OPIC, but i just got IM2 score. Of course, i didn't study much before test. However, as i study and speak continuously thorugh phone call, i want to get higher score. Especially IH score! Anyway, i will also do my best to get that score!

강사 첨삭

Hello, hello!^^ What a wonderful Monday we\'re having today, right? Anyway, it\'s good to hear from you. I\'ve read your composition and I\'m glad to know that you\'re excited about our class. I, too, hope that I can help you earn a high OPIC score. We\'ll concentrate on your weak points and build up on your strengths in English so that in every class, you will have a better chance to get a higher score. By the way, I noticed in your essay that you weren\'t able to punctuate them properly; I hope that you will remember that capitalization and punctuations are also important in written English. I\'m looking forward to my classes with you! See you soon! Take care!^^  above all, I expect that i can improve English skill with new teacher, Alice! >>First of all, I expect that I will be able to improve my English skills with my new teacher, Alice!^^I have taken a test named OPIC, but i just got IM2 score. Of course, i didn\'t study much before test. >> I took a test named, OPIC, but I only got an IM2 score because I didn\'t study much before the test. >> I took a test named, OPIC, but I only got an IM2 score. I expected it because I didn\'t study much before taking the test. However, as i study and speak continuously thorugh phone call, i want to get higher score. Especially IH score!>> However, if I continuously study and speak through the phone, I will be able to get a higher score- especially an IH score! Anyway, i will also do my best to get that score! >>Anyway, I will also do my best to get that score! >>Anyway, I will also do my best to achieve that score! >>Anyway, I ,too, will do my best to get that score!^^

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