homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.These
2.There
3.This
4.There
5.This
6.These
7.There
8.This
9.This
10.This
I have a toy machine gun named "K2"
K2 is a Korean machine gun. It is useful.
Our Korean Army use this gun.
It is remodeling a gun named "M16"
Our Korean Army use this gun at the Vietnam War and the Korean War.
Before the Korean war, we use remodeling the musket.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
A marvelous Monday to you! Wow! You made my day!
You are doing great with your homework. I am impressed!
I think you are becoming familliar with the grammar rules now. Great!
I enjoyed reading your essay. You were able to compose wonderful sentences!
Keep it up! Always be positive and learn more new expressions. You can do it!
See you in class! Tell me more about your essay in class.
Teacher Nina
1.These
>> Correct! 2.There
>> Correct! 3.This
>> Correct! 4.There
>> Correct! 5.This
>> Correct! 6.These
>> Correct! 7.There
>> Correct! 8.This
>> These9.This
>> Correct! 10.This
>> Correct! I have a toy machine gun named \"K2\"
>> I have a toy machine gun called \"K2\".K2 is a Korean machine gun.
>> Correct!
It is useful.
>> Correct!
>> OR: It is beneficial.Our Korean Army use this gun.
>> Correct!
>> OR: The Korean Army use this gun.It is remodeling a gun named \"M16\"
>> Did you mean: It was a remodelled gun called \"M16\".Our Korean Army use this gun at the Vietnam War and the Korean War.
>> The army used this gun during the Vietnam and Korean War.Before the Korean war, we use remodeling the musket.
>> Did you mean: Before the Korean war, we used a remodellled musket.
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