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2013-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Do you think College students should have complete freedom to choose their own courses? Not complete, at least elective subjects . As college students, I want to choose elective subjects myself. We get a class like a high school student. I don't like the way.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank  you for sharing your opinion. It was a nice thought. I understood your idea but it will be better understood if you polish your sentence construction.^^ I believe that you can improve. You are almost there. Just keep constructing sentences if you have time. Take care and see you tomorrow.=) Not complete, at least elective subjects . >>I think that college students should not have complete freedom but they should be free to choose their subjects.As college students, I want to choose elective subjects myself. >>As a college student, I want to choose my own subjects. We get a class like a high school student. >>We have a class like a high school student.I don\'t like the way. >>Correct >>Or: I do not like the way they conduct the class.

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