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2013-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Should students be allowed to grade their teachers? I think they should be allowed to grade their teachers. They are stuents. It means they need to learn not only knowledge but also rule. If they follow school rule well and learn it well, they can get another rule about society easily. And they need to get knowledge, because it will be useful when they have to get a job. So teachers have to make grade about them. If teachers don't check them, they will not follow rules and teachers. They need to have somebody who can check and control them like a teacher.

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Hi! ^^ You wrote a good essay with few mistakes. You just didn\'t read the topic well, I think. ^^ It is the other way around, students giving evaluations for their teachers not teachers giving grades to their students. It\'s fine though. If you have questions regarding this, please ask me in class.. Good night! T. Erine   Should students be allowed to grade their teachers?I think they should be allowed to grade their teachers. >>Correct! They are stuents. >>They are students. It means they need to learn not only knowledge but also rule. >>Correct! If they follow school rule well and learn it well, they can get another rule about society easily. >>If they follow school rules and learn them well, they can easily follow rules set by society.  And they need to get knowledge, because it will be useful when they have to get a job. >>Correct!So teachers have to make grade about them. >>So teachers have to give them grades. If teachers don\'t check them, they will not follow rules and teachers. >>Correct!  They need to have somebody who can check and control them like a teacher. >>Correct!

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