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2013-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Techer Nina! My mom is feeding the Bubble coral. The Bubble coral is eating the clam. It is interesting. I never saw that case. And I didn't feed the coral before so I know the reason of dieing coral before. The reason of dieing coral is didn't feed them.

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Hello Tom^^ How are you? I am excited to talk to you. ^^ I am so happy to receive a composition from you. Yes, it is interesting! So don\'t forget to feed your corals. I know they are in good hands because you take good care of them. Let\'s talk about this in class! See you! Teacher Nina   Techer Nina! >> Teacher Nina!My mom is feeding the Bubble coral. >> Correct The Bubble coral is eating the clam. >> Correct It is interesting. >> Correct >> OR: It\'s entertaining.I never saw that case. >> I never saw a Bubble coral eating a clam. >> OR: I haven\'t seen a situation like that before. And I didn\'t feed the coral before so I know the reason of dieing coral before. >> And I didn\'t feed the coral before so I know the reason why it died.The reason of dieing coral is didn\'t feed them. >> The reason of a coral\'s death is because of hunger. >> OR: Corals die because people don\'t feed them.

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