homework
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Techer Nina!
My mom is feeding the Bubble coral.
The Bubble coral is eating the clam. It is interesting.
I never saw that case. And I didn't feed the coral before so I know the reason of dieing coral before.
The reason of dieing coral is didn't feed them.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom^^
How are you? I am excited to talk to you. ^^
I am so happy to receive a composition from you. Yes, it is interesting!
So don\'t forget to feed your corals. I know they are in good hands because you take good care of them.
Let\'s talk about this in class! See you!
Teacher Nina
Techer Nina!
>> Teacher Nina!My mom is feeding the Bubble coral.
>> Correct The Bubble coral is eating the clam.
>> Correct
It is interesting.
>> Correct
>> OR: It\'s entertaining.I never saw that case.
>> I never saw a Bubble coral eating a clam.
>> OR: I haven\'t seen a situation like that before.
And I didn\'t feed the coral before so I know the reason of dieing coral before.
>> And I didn\'t feed the coral before so I know the reason why it died.The reason of dieing coral is didn\'t feed them.
>> The reason of a coral\'s death is because of hunger.
>> OR: Corals die because people don\'t feed them.
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