Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't know conspiracy theory. I have nothing to say for this topic. Today I will write diary. Today I sick a little. When I woke up morning, I feel pain of my eyes and throat. So I called my boss and I apply for a leave only morning. So I just lied abed in the morning. Today I have a appointment with my pastor because every Wednesday I study the bible. When I go to study the bible, I am very happy. Sometimes I bored the time, I feel good this time. But I am very tired now. If I sick foreign country, I will be sad. Aimee I don't know your mind exactly, I want to cheer up! When I went to Philippine, I was very sick but nobody care of me. At that time I heard that philippine's hospital is poor surrounding. So I was very sick, I can't go to hospital. At that time I just bear my pain from stomach. Anyway I just want to tell you, Cheer uo Aimee! You are strong in him.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Thank you for your concern.
I do hope that we can be together for a longer time.
But still if you need my help.
I am still here for you.
Good job.
You\'ve improved well from our first day.
I hope you continue to improve.
Always,
~Aimee^^
>> I don\'t know what a conspiracy theory is.
I have nothing to say for this topic.
>> Correct
Today I will write diary.
>> So for today, I will write a diary.
Today I sick a little.
>> Today, I\'m a little sick.
>> I\'m a little sick today.
When I woke up morning, I feel pain of my eyes and throat.
>> When I woke up this morning, my eyes and throat are painful.
So I called my boss and I apply for a leave only morning.
>> That is why I called my boos and asked for a leave this morning.
So I just lied abed in the morning.
>> I just stayed in bed in the morning.
Today I have a appointment with my pastor because every Wednesday I study the bible.
>> Today, I have an appointment with my pastor because I have a bible study every Wednesday.
When I go to study the bible, I am very happy.
>> Whenever I go for a bible study, I am very happy.
Sometimes I bored the time, I feel good this time.
>> Sometimes, I feel bored and I feel good during this time.
But I am very tired now.
>> Correct
If I sick foreign country, I will be sad.
>> If I will be sick in a foreign country, I will be sad.
Aimee I don\'t know your mind exactly, I want to cheer up!
>> Aimee, I don\'t know what you thinking. I want you to cheer up!
When I went to Philippine, I was very sick but nobody care of me.
>> When I went to the Philippines, I was very sick but nobody cared for me.
At that time I heard that philippine\'s hospital is poor surrounding.
>> At that time, I heard that Philippines hospitals has poor surrounding.
So I was very sick, I can\'t go to hospital.
>> CI was very sick and I couldn\'t go to a hospital.
At that time I just bear my pain from stomach.
>> At that time, I just endured my stomachache
Anyway I just want to tell you, Cheer up Aimee! You are strong in him.
>> Anyways, I just want to tell you, Cheer Up Aimee! You are strong because he is with you.
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