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2013-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.goes 2.understand 3.laugh 4.is 5.sleep 6.looks 7.walks 8.make 9.am 10.has Today,my schoolmates played dodgeball. I killed 9 people during playing dodge ball. But there was last person. he was alive. I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball hit him during dodge ball. And finally he died because of my classmates ball.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom ^0^ It\'s the last day of October! Thank you for doing your best this month and also for being a wonderful student of mine. Excellent! I am glad that you are knowlegable about the present tense of verbs. Keep it up! Oh! Congratulations! I think your team won the game, am I right? Yipee! Can\'t wait to talk to you in class! See you! Have a great night! Teacher Nina   1.goes >> CORRECT!2.understand >> CORRECT! 3.laugh >> CORRECT! 4.is >> CORRECT!5.sleep >> CORRECT!6.looks >> CORRECT!7.walks >> CORRECT!8.make >> CORRECT!9.am >> CORRECT!10.has>> CORRECT!Today,my schoolmates played dodgeball. >> CORRECT! >> OR: My schoolmates and I played dodgeball today.I killed 9 people during playing dodge ball. >> I killed nine people during the game. >> OR: I killed nine people while playing dodgeball. >> OR: I was able to hit nine people while playing dodgeball.But there was last person. >> But there was still one person left. >> OR: But there was still one last man standing. he was alive. >> CORRECT! >> OR: He was still standing. I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball hit him during dodge ball. >> Did you mean: I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball to him during the game.,And finally he died because of my classmates ball. >> Did you mean: And finally he died because my classmate hit him. >> OR: Finally, he lost because the ball of my classmate hit him.

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