homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.goes
2.understand
3.laugh
4.is
5.sleep
6.looks
7.walks
8.make
9.am
10.has
Today,my schoolmates played dodgeball.
I killed 9 people during playing dodge ball.
But there was last person.
he was alive.
I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball hit him during dodge ball.
And finally he died because of my classmates ball.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom ^0^
It\'s the last day of October!
Thank you for doing your best this month and also for being a wonderful student of mine.
Excellent! I am glad that you are knowlegable about the present tense of verbs. Keep it up!
Oh! Congratulations! I think your team won the game, am I right? Yipee!
Can\'t wait to talk to you in class! See you! Have a great night!
Teacher Nina
1.goes
>> CORRECT!2.understand
>> CORRECT!
3.laugh
>> CORRECT!
4.is
>> CORRECT!5.sleep
>> CORRECT!6.looks
>> CORRECT!7.walks
>> CORRECT!8.make
>> CORRECT!9.am
>> CORRECT!10.has>> CORRECT!Today,my schoolmates played dodgeball.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: My schoolmates and I played dodgeball today.I killed 9 people during playing dodge ball.
>> I killed nine people during the game.
>> OR: I killed nine people while playing dodgeball.
>> OR: I was able to hit nine people while playing dodgeball.But there was last person.
>> But there was still one person left.
>> OR: But there was still one last man standing. he was alive.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: He was still standing. I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball hit him during dodge ball.
>> Did you mean: I was the guy who stood there and waited for the ball to him during the game.,And finally he died because of my classmates ball.
>> Did you mean: And finally he died because my classmate hit him.
>> OR: Finally, he lost because the ball of my classmate hit him.
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