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2013-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. When her dog died, (she cried very hard) for half an hour. c. sobbed -I can't get to sleep well due to sobbing from next door. 2. It was foggy and I watched my friend (move out of sight) into the distance as he walked away. c. disappear -I have seen files on the desk. But, suddenly, it disappear. 3. Would you like some more to eat. No thank you. I've had (more than enough) already. d. plenty If I was in plenty of time, I have finished my presentation well. 4. This road (turns) a lot. e. bends When light goes through the glass and water, it bends. 5. Please do this (now)! a. immediately If you have a problem in relationship, don't postpone the solution. Solve it immediately.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jo! Thank you for your composition! You wrote good sentences and I really admire you for that! Keep it up! Take care and have a happy weekend! T. JanE ^^ 1. When her dog died, (she cried very hard) for half an hour.c. sobbed>> Correct -I can\'t get to sleep well due to sobbing from next door.>> I can\'t get to sleep due to a sobbing sound from the next door. 2. It was foggy and I watched my friend (move out of sight) into the distance as he walked away.c. disappear>> Correct -I have seen files on the desk. But, suddenly, it disappear.>> I saw files on the desk, but suddenly, they disappeared. 3. Would you like some more to eat. No thank you. I\'ve had (more than enough) already.d. plenty>> Correct If I was in plenty of time, I have finished my presentation well.>> If I had plenty of time, I could have finished my presentation well. 4. This road (turns) a lot.e. bends >> Correct When light goes through the glass and water, it bends.>> Correct 5. Please do this (now)!a. immediately >> Correct If you have a problem in relationship, don\'t postpone the solution. Solve it immediately. >> If you have a problem about relationship, don\'t postpone looking for a solution. Solve it immediately. 

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