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The development of IT techmology including social networking service
present good point and bad point for us.
It serve for us convinience and speedy connecting with whatever.
But that's just it the bad point, too.
It cannot filter itself.
So it's for ourselves.
It's not only development of IT technology but also every progress should accompany with bad point and good point.
It's important thing is whether on using for ourselves.
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The development of IT techmology including social networking service present good point and bad point for us.
>>The development of IT technology including social networking sites present good and bad point for us.It serve for us convinience and speedy connecting with whatever.
>>It gives us convenience and fast connection with whatever or whoever we want to have an access with.But that\'s just it the bad point, too.
>>But it has a disaavantage, too.It cannot filter itself.
>>It can not filter everything by itself.So it\'s for ourselves.
>>So it is our responsibility to be responsible.It\'s not only development of IT technologyibut also every progress should accompany with bad point and good point.
>>It\'s not only in terms of IT technology development because every progress has advantages as well as disadvantages.It\'s important thing is whether on using for ourselves.
>>The most important thing is whether to use it for oursleves or other purposes.
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