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When I was 2grade I had a terrifying experience.
I those days, I slept.At midnight I heard a strange sound.
It was like someone is eating hard thing.
And I heard some water sound just like "Tok""tok"! Next day Iwoke up and went to the bathroom, But the water was not flow.
And i checked my refrigerator,and some foods were missing.
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A fun Friday to you Tom!
Happy first day of November!!
I hope that you will have a marvelous month ahead of you.
Thank you for sending this in.^^
I felt scared after reading your composition.
I usually sleep at midnight. I think I should sleep early. Hihihi.
You are brave! What did you do after you found out that some food were missing?
Tell me about it in class! See you! Take Care!
Teacher Nina
When I was 2grade I had a terrifying experience.
>> When I was in second grade, I had a terrifying experience.I those days, I slept. At midnight I heard a strange sound.
>> During those days, I slept at midnight and I heard a strange sound.
It was like someone is eating hard thing.
>> It was like someone was eating a hard thing.
OR: It seems like someone was eating something that is hard.And I heard some water sound just like \"Tok\"\"tok\"!
>> Did you mean: I heard a sound of a flowing water. (Tok Tok is actually the sound when someone is knocking at the door.)
>> OR: I heard someone was knocking at the door.
Next day Iwoke up and went to the bathroom, But the water was not flow.
>> On the next day, I woke up and went to the bathroom but the water was not flowing.
>> OR: I woke up the next day and went to the bathroom but the water was not flowing.And i checked my refrigerator,and some foods were missing.
>> And I checked my refrigerator and some food were missing.
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