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I think that whole acceptance is pleasure and satisfaction for give us. The blind pursuit of the desire or attainment might harm us. So the first of all we should to acecept ourselves for exsitence. And then we will can pursuit or accomplish for more essential thing. The instrinsic pursuit can give pleasure or satisfaction for us.

Hi there^^ Thank you for sending in this composition^^ I made some corrections, so please try to review those^^ See you tomorrow^^Have a great day and take care^^ I think that whole acceptance is pleasure and satisfaction for give us. >>I think that the whole acceptance will give us pleasure and satisfaction.The blind pursuit of the desire or attainment might harm us. >>The blind pursuit of desire or attainment might give us some harm. >>The blind pursuit of desire or attainment might harm us. So the first of all we should to acecept ourselves for exsitence. >>So first of all, we need to accept our existence.And then we will can pursuit or accomplish for more essential thing. >>And then we can pursue or accomplish essential things.The instrinsic pursuit can give pleasure or satisfaction for us. >>Intrinsic pursuit can give us pleasure or satisfaction.