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2013-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.b 2.a 3.b 4.a 5.b 6.a 7.a 8.a 9.a 10.b These days I'm making a Orange Jam. We cutting the Orange's skin and we will make some Orange juice by some hard thing. We will put some suggar in that Orange juice. And we are going to grill that.Finally that Orange juice will be a delicious Jam.

강사 첨삭

Hello Tom! A pleasant Tuesday evening! Wow! I haven\'t tried an orange jam yet. I think it is dellicious. I want to try it. Who taught you how to make an orange jam? I hope to learn it someday. You did a good job with your homework. Don\'t forget to go over the corrections for your further improvement. If you have any questions, just ask me in class. See you! Teacher Nina   1.b >> Corect! 2.a >> Corect! 3.b >> Corect! 4.a >> B5.b >> Corect! 6.a >> B7.a >> Corect! 8.a >> Corect! 9.a >> Corect! 10.b >> Corect!   These days I\'m making a Orange Jam. >> These days, I\'m making an Orange Jam.We cutting the Orange\'s skin and we will make some Orange juice by some hard thing. >> Did you mean: We peel off the orange\'s skin and we make a juice. >> OR: We peel off the orange\'s skin and we make a juice with use of a juicer.We will put some suggar in that Orange juice. >> We put some sugar in the juice. >> Better: : We add sugar into the juice.And we are going to grill that. >> Correct! >> OR: We are going to grill it. Finally that Orange juice will be a delicious Jam. >> Finally, it will be a delicious jam. >> OR: It will be a delicious jam.

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