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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Write the correct form of the verbs. 1. It is raining now. It began raining two hours ago. So it is raining for two hours. 2. you heard anything from Tom since Christmas? 3. New York is one of the largest cities of the world. 4. This house costs 35,000 pounds in 1980. please check it. Describe your puddle. In the past my uncle gave me a puddle as a present so I was so happy but my family members didn't like it because of reality problems. For instance, somebody have to constantly feed a dog or take it to the hospital when it is sick. It was burdensome for them. I had no idea about them in that I was just kid. I was just interested with playing with it such as a walk with. However, having said that, as an adult I will agree if my kids ask an approval to have a pet because there are more advantages than disadvantages. What is the government’s effort for pets? There are some efforts for pets. First of all, they made special arrangements for abandoned dogs with gradually increasing the number of them. For example, when I have a pet, I have to register for it dong office. If I don't comply with it, I have to pay a fine. The pets which was registered are inserted a chip into inter or external to monitor an owner, So even though I miss my pet, I could easily find it thanks to it. Secondly, they hire more workers and build spacious space to care abandoned dogs.So they can accommodate all of them, to say the least. What effects do you think human have a wild animal? In my country, the number of people who want to have a wild animal as their pet has been increasing. So indiscriminate poaching to meet demand has placed many animal species in danger of extinction. They only have a pet for self-satisfaction and show irresponsible behavior to keep it. That is to say, it only would be their substitute’s image that they want to show others. For example, one famous single bought crocodile because he said it’s really cool and man’s symbol but after few days, it was dye in that he had no any idea on how to keep it. Raising this kind of a pet needs many efforts. For instance, I have to regular check temperature, humidity and find specific foods. In the end, the greedy to only express themselves to others without respect of animal’s life will lead to fall into ruin from sense of guilty or money.

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Write the correct form of the verbs.
1. It is raining now. It began raining two hours ago. So it is raining for two hours.

>>It has been raining for two hours.
2. you heard anything from Tom since Christmas?

>>Have you heard anything from Tom since Christmas?
3. New York is one of the largest cities of the world.

>>correct^^
4. This house costs 35,000 pounds in 1980.

>>cost
please check it.
>>correct^^
Describe your puddle.
In the past my uncle gave me a puddle as a present so I was so happy but my family members didn\'t like it because of reality problems.

>>In the past, my uncle gave me a puddle as a present, so I was so happy but my family members doesn\'t like it because of some problems.

For instance, somebody have to constantly feed a dog or take it to the hospital when it is sick.

>>For instance, someone should constantly feed the dog or take it to the hospital when it is sick.

It was burdensome for them.

>>correct!

I had no idea about them in that I was just kid.

>>I have no idea about it because I was just a kid.

I was just interested with playing with it such as a walk with.

>>I was just interested playing with it, like walking with the dog.

However, having said that, as an adult I will agree if my kids ask an approval to have a pet because there are more advantages than disadvantages.
>>However, having said that, as an adult, if my kids ask permission to have a pet, I will agree with it because it has more advantage than disadvantage.
What is the government’s effort for pets?
There are some efforts for pets.

>>correct^^

First of all, they made special arrangements for abandoned dogs with gradually increasing the number of them.

>>First of all, they made some special arrangement fro abandoned dogs, especially it is gradually increasing.

For example, when I have a pet, I have to register for it dong office.

>>For example, When I have a pet, I have to reciter it in the dong office.

If I don\'t comply with it, I have to pay a fine.

>>correct^^

The pets which was registered are inserted a chip into inter or external to monitor an owner, So even though I miss my pet, I could easily find it thanks to it.

>>The pets that are registered, they insert a chip to their internal or external, so that the owner will be able to monitor them. So eventhough I miss my pet, I could easily find it.

Secondly, they hire more workers and build spacious space to care abandoned dogs.So they can accommodate all of them, to say the least.
>>Second [Furthermore], they hire a lot of workers and build spacious space to take care of the abandoned dogs. So they can accommodate all of them.
What effects do you think human have a wild animal?
In my country, the number of people who want to have a wild animal as their pet has been increasing.

>>correct^^

So indiscriminate poaching to meet demand has placed many animal species in danger of extinction.

>>correct^^

They only have a pet for self-satisfaction and show irresponsible behavior to keep it.

>>They only have pet for their self satisfaction and they show irresponsible behavior.

That is to say, it only would be their substitute’s image that they want to show others.

>>That is to say, it is only their substitute image that they want to show to others.

For example, one famous single bought crocodile because he said it’s really cool and man’s symbol but after few days, it was dye in that he had no any idea on how to keep it.

>>For example, one famous person bought a crocodile because he said that it is really cool and it symbolizes men but after few days, the crocodile died and he doesn\'t have any ides on what to do.

Raising this kind of a pet needs many efforts.

>>Raising this kinds of pet need a a lot of effort.

For instance, I have to regular check temperature, humidity and find specific foods.

>>For instance, I have to check the temperature, humidity and specific foods regularly

In the end, the greedy to only express themselves to others without respect of animal’s life will lead to fall into ruin from sense of guilty or money.

>>In the end, they are greedy because they are being a show off to others and they don\'t have any respect for animal\'s life will lead to ruin the sense of guilt or money.