homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to spend my free time outdoor.
If I spend my free time in my home,I can't have many activities.
I can have many activities when I prefer to spend my free time outdoor.
So I prefer to spend my free time.That choice is more valuable.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom^^
Happy mid-week!
I heard that it is raining in Korea today. I hope that you are doing fine.
You like playing sports with your friends and you also like hiking.
It shows that you are really enjoy outdoor activities. I love it too!
What outdoor activities do you like the most? Why?
Tell me more about this in class. See you!
Teacher Nina
I prefer to spend my free time outdoor.
>> CorrectIf I spend my free time in my home,I can\'t have many activities.
>> If I spend my free time at home, I can\'t do a lot of activities.
>> OR: If I spend my time inside the house, I can\'t do many things.I can have many activities when I prefer to spend my free time outdoor.
>> I can have many activities when I spend my free time outdoor.
>> OR: When I spend my time outside of the house, I can do outdoor activities.So I prefer to spend my free time.That choice is more valuable.
>> So I spend my free time outdoor and that choice is more valuable.
>> OR: So I prefer to spend my free time outside of the house and that choice is more valuable to me.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.