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2013-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.these 2.this 3.there 4.This 5.This 6.these 7.there 8.this 9.there 10.These I played soccer today. I had a goal. Everyone celebrated me! ifelt happy! But we were losed.Oh~~~

강사 첨삭

A charming Thursday afternoon to you Tom^^ Wow! You did pretty well with your homework! I think it was like a piece of cake for you, am I right? Oh! Congratulations! It is because you did something great for your team! Think about the brigher side, you hit a goal! Don\'t be sad because you lost the game. You should think that even though you didn\'t win, you still did your best! Cheer up Tom!  Smile! See you in class! Teacher Nina   1.these >> Correct! 2.this >> Correct! 3.there >> Correct! 4.This >> THERE5.This >> Correct! 6.these >> Correct! 7.there >> Correct! 8.this >> Correct! 9.there >> Correct! 10.These >> Correct! I played soccer today. >> Correct! I had a goal. >> Correct! Everyone celebrated me! >> Everyone celebrated including me. >> OR: We had a celebration. ifelt happy! >> Correct!  ( Don\'t forget proper spacing and capitalization ^^) But we were losed.Oh~~~ >> But we lose the game. >> OR: We lost the game.

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