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2013-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. Because my close friends and I have a good marital compatibility. If I play with large number friends,I can't talk to all round because there are a lot of friends. Or, I prefer to spend time alone.Because I don't care about my joy in my freetime. How about you?Do you like play with a lot of friends or alone?

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Hello there Tom! T.G.I.F.!!! I know that you are waiting for this day. Yipee! Do you have any plans for tonight? Are you going to watch a movie this weekend? What do you usually do when you spend your time alone? Do you read books? I prefer to be with my bestfriends. I have two bestfriends.  I usually listen to music or play games on my mobile phone when I\'m alone. Hihihi. Let us talk more about this in class. See you! Teacher NIna   I prefer to spend time with one or two close friends. >> I prefer to spend time with one or two of my close friends.Because my close friends and I have a good marital compatibility. >> It is because my close friends and I have a good relationship. (Marital means husband or marriage.) >> OR: It is because my close friends and I are compatible.If I play with large number friends,I can\'t talk to all round because there are a lot of friends. >> Did you mean: If I play with a large number of friends, I can\'t talk to all of them.Or, I prefer to spend time alone. >> I sometimes prefer to spend time alone. >> OR: I want to be alone sometimes. Because I don\'t care about my joy in my freetime. >> It is because I don\'t mind if I am happy during my free time. >> OR: It is because I don\'t care if I am happy during my free time.How about you? >> Correct! Do you like play with a lot of friends or alone? >> Do you like to play with a lot of friends or to be alone?

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