homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to spend time with one or two close friends.
Because my close friends and I have a good marital compatibility.
If I play with large number friends,I can't talk to all round because there are a lot of friends.
Or, I prefer to spend time alone.Because I don't care about my joy in my freetime.
How about you?Do you like play with a lot of friends or alone?
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
T.G.I.F.!!! I know that you are waiting for this day. Yipee!
Do you have any plans for tonight? Are you going to watch a movie this weekend?
What do you usually do when you spend your time alone? Do you read books?
I prefer to be with my bestfriends. I have two bestfriends.
I usually listen to music or play games on my mobile phone when I\'m alone. Hihihi.
Let us talk more about this in class. See you!
Teacher NIna
I prefer to spend time with one or two close friends.
>> I prefer to spend time with one or two of my close friends.Because my close friends and I have a good marital compatibility.
>> It is because my close friends and I have a good relationship. (Marital means husband or marriage.)
>> OR: It is because my close friends and I are compatible.If I play with large number friends,I can\'t talk to all round because there are a lot of friends.
>> Did you mean: If I play with a large number of friends, I can\'t talk to all of them.Or, I prefer to spend time alone.
>> I sometimes prefer to spend time alone.
>> OR: I want to be alone sometimes.
Because I don\'t care about my joy in my freetime.
>> It is because I don\'t mind if I am happy during my free time.
>> OR: It is because I don\'t care if I am happy during my free time.How about you?
>> Correct!
Do you like play with a lot of friends or alone?
>> Do you like to play with a lot of friends or to be alone?
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