Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday!!!!
Prosperity is not without many fears and distastes; adversity not without many comforts and hopes.
Good morning there! Happy Monday.^_^ Let us start the week with no fears and distastes.Fill it with comforts and hopes. And your perfect score gives us hope that someday, somehow, you will be really good in English. Don\'t you think so?^^ Take care and see you^^
~T. Chloe^^
1) big -bigger - biggest
>> Correct
2) easy -easier - easiest
>> Correct
3) much - more - most
>> Correct
4) little - less - least
>> Correct
5) interesting - more interesting - most interesting
>> Correct
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I use a computer every day in my office.
>> I use my computer everyday in the office.
I use a few softwares to work too.
>> I use a few softwares at work, too.
The software that I use most is the documenting program.
>> Correct
The latest software that I begin to use is SAS software.
>> Correct
It is a statistics software.
>> Correct
I use the software to anaylze data.
>> Correct [analyze]
>> OR: I use this software to analyze data.
Nowadays, it becomes very important to anayze big data as the use of internet and SNS increases.
>> Nowadays, this software becomes very important in analyzing large data as the uses of internet and SNS increase.^^
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