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2013-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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The appropriate rules and limitations contribute to person's hapiness. For example, apposite the rules discipline serve to affectional statiblity for children. Moreover, the various kind of public rules give to usability for many people. But it should make after through sufficient discuss and interpersonal respect. If it didn't it that might cause trouble to person and organization.

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Hello, there! How are you on a Monday morning, Ma\'am? I hope you are doing great every day^^ Please take care of yourself very well. Ma\'am~ Please be careful about the use of passive versus active voice *_* Kindly have time to review them >.< Have a great day, bye bye!^^ The appropriate rules and limitations contribute to person\'s hapiness. >>CORRECT!For example, apposite the rules discipline serve to affectional statiblity for children. >>For example, apposite rules serve as discipline to attain affectional statiblity for children.Moreover, the various kind of public rules give to usability for many people. >>Moreover, various kinds of public rules give an array of usability for many people.But it should make after through sufficient discuss and interpersonal respect. >>But it should be made after a  thorough and sufficient discussion and interpersonal respect.If it didn\'t it that might cause trouble to person and organization. >>If these things are not done, it might cause trouble to people and organization.

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