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First, I don't want to imagine my work without computers. One day, there was a TV program to experiment that people can survive with only computer in a room for a week. The result was yes because people could order their daily necessity from online shops and do many things with computers. Nowadays, it is common life to purchase products at on-line shops, search information and do many procedures for everything. If you cannot use computer, it means you are in poverty of information. Computers make our lives are very convenient. However, they makes also side-effects. People can do everything with computers so they usually stay at a few places such as houses or offices. Then, people do not move as much as before and it become a health problem. Also, some people play game too much, they get game addiction. We can do many things with computers but also we need to be smart users.

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