homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I prefer to live in a traditional house.
There are own flovor in traditional house.
One of them is HanOk.
It is a traditional house in Korea.
In summer,the house is cool.
And winter,It is warm.
Korean use nature things to make HonOk.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom^^
A magnificent afternoon to you!
I learned something about Korean culture today. Thanks to you!
Thank you for sending your essay today.
You were able to express your thoughts however, be careful with the words you use. ^^
Can you tell me about the disadvantages of living in a traditional house?
See you in class! Have a fun day!
Teacher Nina
I prefer to live in a traditional house.
>> Correct! There are own flovor in traditional house.
>> Did you mean: There are different types of a traditional house.
>> OR: Traditional houses come with different designs.One of them is HanOk.
>> Correct! It is a traditional house in Korea.
>> Correct! In summer,the house is cool.
>> In summer, the atmosphere in the house is cool.And winter,It is warm.
>> And during winter, it is warm.Korean use nature things to make HonOk.
>> Koreans use materials which are from nature to make Hanok.
>> OR: Koreans use natural and recyclable materials to build Hanok.
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