homework
학생이 쓴 원문
If the international exponsition is about food, I will choose Bibimbob.
Because it is the most famous food in Korea.
And many other people know that food.
If the international exponsition is about thing,I will choose Goryeo celadon.
Goreo celadon has a very high artistic value.
It's color is celadon green.
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If the international exponsition is about food, I will choose Bibimbob.
>> If the international exposition is about food, I will choose Bibimbob.Because it is the most famous food in Korea.
>> Correct! And many other people know that food.
>> And many people know that kind of food.
>> OR: A lot of people know Bibimbob.If the international exponsition is about thing,I will choose Goryeo celadon.
>> If the international exposition is about a thing, I will choose Goryeo Celadon.Goreo celadon has a very high artistic value.
>> Correct! (Spelling check: Goryeo ^^)
>> OR: Goryeo Celadon has a great value.It\'s color is celadon green.
>> Its color is Celadon green.
>> OR: The Celadon is green.
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