homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I went to the library yesterday.
I read a lot of books.
Some were exciting and other were scary.
I read a horror books.
"The Moon's game and "The mutant"
I also read "Dead room" and "28 weeks later"
It was terrific!
강사 첨삭
A marvelous composition of yours Tom!
Happy Monday! It\'s the start of a wonderful week again!
You did an awesome job because most of your sentences were right! Keep it up!
I just want you to be careful with your subject verb agreement. Just keep on writing! ^^
I was able to watch episode three, four and five of \"Walking dead.\" ^^ It was great!
Keep on reading English books to improve skills, take note of the difficult words.
See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
I went to the library yesterday.
>> Correct! I read a lot of books.
>> Correct! Some were exciting and other were scary.
>> Some were exciting and the others were scary.I read a horror books.
>> I read a horror book.
>> OR: I read horror books.\"The Moon\'s game and \"The mutant\"
>> The title of the books are \" The Moon\'s game\" and \'The mutant\". I also read \"Dead room\" and \"28 weeks later\"
>> Correct! It was terrific!
>> Correct!
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