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2013-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I went to the library yesterday. I read a lot of books. Some were exciting and other were scary. I read a horror books. "The Moon's game and "The mutant" I also read "Dead room" and "28 weeks later" It was terrific!

강사 첨삭

A marvelous composition of yours Tom! Happy Monday! It\'s the start of a wonderful week again! You did an awesome job because most of your sentences were right! Keep it up! I just want you to be careful with your subject verb agreement. Just keep on writing! ^^ I was able to watch episode three, four and five of \"Walking dead.\" ^^ It was great! Keep on reading English books to improve skills, take note of the difficult words. See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   I went to the library yesterday. >> Correct! I read a lot of books. >> Correct! Some were exciting and other were scary. >> Some were exciting and the others were scary.I read a horror books. >> I read a horror book. >> OR: I read horror books.\"The Moon\'s game and \"The mutant\" >> The title of the books are \" The Moon\'s game\" and \'The mutant\". I also read \"Dead room\" and \"28 weeks later\" >> Correct! It was terrific! >> Correct!

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