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2013-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.who 2.where 3.where 4.who 5.who 6.which 7.where 8.which 9.who 10.who Today, I saw spider who can hunt the feed quickly. And I am breeding it now. I put some insect in a cage for insect. My spider ate a small aphid and beetle. What a wonderful sight! I like spiders. Because it can hunt the insect quickly.

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Hello Tom! Happy second day of the week! Wow! You are really good person. I only like butterflies. Hihihi. Thank you for sending this in.^^ Keep up the good work! I encourage you to express yourself more in our class. ^^ See you! Have a nice day! Teacher Nina   There is often confusion about the use of who, whose, whom, that, which or where.   > We use who when referring to people or when we want to know the person. Example: The person who answered the phone was very helpful.Who ate all the chocolates?   > We use which to refer to a thing or an idea, and to ask about choices.Example: My car, which is 20 years old, isn\'t worth much.Which size would you like, small, medium or large?   > When who is the object, whom, with a preposition, can be used instead, but it is formal and rather old-fashioned. In modern speech, we use who, or we leave out the pronoun.-You are referring to a person who no longer works here.-The person to whom you are referring no longer works here.- The person (who) you are you referring to no longer works here.   > Where (relative adverb) refers to places and locations.Example: Where is the station please?That\'s where I spent my childhood.   Examples of use : I know a woman.She speaks 6 languages. > I know a woman who speaks 6 languages.     I know a woman. Her husband speaks 6 languages. > I know a woman whose husband speaks 6 languages.     I spoke to a person yesterday. > The person to whom I spoke yesterday. (formal)> The person (who) I spoke to yesterday. (informal)     I live in a house. It is 200 years old. > I live in a house which/that is 200 years old.   1.who >> Correct! 2.where >> Correct! 3.where >> which 4.who >> Correct! 5.who >> Correct! 6.which >> Correct! 7.where >> Correct! 8.which >> Correct! 9.who >> where 10.who >> Correct! Today, I saw spider who can hunt the feed quickly. >> I saw a spider who can hunt for food quickly. And I am breeding it now. >> Correct! >> OR: I am taking good care of it now.I put some insect in a cage for insect. >> I put the insect into a container. >> OR: I placed it into a container for insects.My spider ate a small aphid and beetle. >> Correct!  (Spelling check: aphid)What a wonderful sight! >> Correct! I like spiders. >> Correct! Because it can hunt the insect quickly. >> It is because it can hunt an insect quickly.

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