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2013-11-19 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

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<compositon> 1. When my friend came home so, I would make him Tteokbokki, rice cakes in hot sauce. I went to grocery shop to buy ingredients such as rice cakes, some vegetables and chili pepper paste. I came home and I knew that I forgot to buy chili pepper paste. It was very important ingredient. Since we were very hungry, I could go to the grocery shop again. So I cooked Tteokbokki with soy sauce instead of chili pepper paste. Soy sauce was not hot as much as chili pepper paste. However, we enjoyed Tteokbokki with soy sauce. 2. When I was a child, I used to take care of my younger sister if my mom was out. Whenever my younger sister was hungry, I had to make some food by myself. I used to cook fried eggs because it was the only food that I could cook. Even though it was so simple my younger sister and I enjoyed it every time. That is the reason why the most memorable food is a fried egg.

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This composition made me smile. I can say that fried egg is more toothsome than boiled egg so I can say that you weren\'t a poor cook at all. Don\'t get me wrong Ma\'am, it is quite true. When I was young, I didn\'t even know how to cook simple food like fried egg. Anyway, thanks for sharing me about your childhood. It is awesome! -Teacher Chloe <compositon>1. When my friend came home so, I would make him Tteokbokki, rice cakes in hot sauce. >>My friend visited me at home so I prepared tteokbokki for him. I went to grocery shop to buy ingredients such as rice cakes, some vegetables and chili pepper paste. >>So I went to the grocery story to buy its ingredients. I bought some cakes, vegetables and chili pepper paste.I came home and I knew that I forgot to buy chili pepper paste. >>When I got home, I realized that I forgot to buy chili pepper paste.It was very important ingredient. >>It is a very important ingredient for tteokbokki. Since we were very hungry, I could go to the grocery shop again. >>Since we were very hungry, I didn\'t go back to the grocery shop anymore.So I cooked Tteokbokki with soy sauce instead of chili pepper paste. >>I cooked tteokbokki with soy sauce instead of chili pepper paste. Soy sauce was not hot as much as chili pepper paste. >>Tteokbokki cooked with soy sauce is not as hot as chili pepper paste with it. However, we enjoyed Tteokbokki with soy sauce. >>However, we enjoyed it. 2. When I was a child, I used to take care of my younger sister if my mom was out. >>When I was a child, I used to take care of my younger sister if my mom is out.Whenever my younger sister was hungry, I had to make some food by myself. >>Correct! >>Whenever my younger sister was hungry, I had to prepare some food for her.I used to cook fried eggs because it was the only food that I could cook. >>Correct!Even though it was so simple my younger sister and I enjoyed it every time. >>Though it was just so simple for my younger siste, I enjoyed it everytime. That is the reason why the most memorable food is a fried egg. >>That is the reason why my most forgetable food is fried egg.

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