homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there!^^
You must take care of your health in order to avoid more serious problems^^
Remember, prevention is really better than cure!^^
Have a great Wednesday^^ See you!
I have had health problems.
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I have had a cold, a headache or indigestion.
>>CORRECT!
That was usually when my immune system was bad.
>>That was usual when my immune system had gone haywire.
I think that when I got a lot of stress, my immune system became bad.
>>CORRECT!
And irregular eating habit made me unhealthy too.
>>Furthermore, irregular eating habits made me unhealthy too.
At that time, I usually went to the hospital and took medicine.
>>CORRECT!
Some nutrient food helped me recover.
>>Some nutritious food helped me recover.
I tried to exercise after I got better.
>>CORRECT!
>>I tried to exercise after feeling better.
>>Upon feeling better, I tried to exercise.
I think that nowadays, Koreans exercise very often.
>>CORRECT!
We can see the exercising people in the neighborhood easily.
>>We can easily see people exercising in the neighborhood.
There are so many people in the fitness center or gym after work.
>>CORRECT!
I usually go jogging in the park nearby my house on weekends.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t have enough time to exercise on week because I have to work late.
>>I don\'t have enough time to exercise on weekdays because I have to work late.
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