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2013-11-20 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

1. amazingly : adverb 2. Lutheran : noun 3. conscious : adjective 4. conscience : noun 5. development : noun <composition> There are farmers and farms in the countryside in Korea. They cultivate farmland to grow crops such as rice and vegetables. Farmers are very busy and work hard in summer. On the otherhand, they have spare time in winter. I have never tried farming. But my father cultivate crops. He grow sweat potato and chilli. I have been in my father's farm. It was very silent and fresh. So I feel calm and refreshing.

강사 첨삭

I really love to go to a farm. I think we have to go together so we could unwind. (Hahaha!) Anyway Ma\'am, just stay calm and enjoy for now. Enjoy the rest of your evening. -Teacher Chloe 1. amazingly : adverb >>Correct!2. Lutheran : noun >>Correct!3. conscious : adjective >>Correct!4. conscience : noun >>Correct!5. development : noun>>Correct!<composition>There are farmers and farms in the countryside in Korea. >>There are farmers at farms in the countrysides of Korea. They cultivate farmland to grow crops such as rice and vegetables. >>Correct!Farmers are very busy and work hard in summer. >>Correct!On the otherhand, they have spare time in winter.>>On the other hand, they have spare time in winter. I have never tried farming. >>Correct!But my father cultivate crops. >>My father cultivates lands for growing plants or crops.He grow sweat potato and chilli. >>He grows swee potatoes and chilli peppers. I have been in my father\'s farm. >>I have been to my father\'s farm. It was very silent and fresh. >>Correct! So I feel calm and refreshing. >>I felt calmness and freshness.

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