homework

I will take my camera. Because I want to leave a great tourist attraction. I also take my comfortable clothes. I don't want to take uncomfortable clothes. I will take a map too. Map will help me don't get lost. And beside,there are many things.

Amazing Wednesday Tom! Thank you so much for sending this essay. You did great! I know that you are going to bring a camera with you. It is because you told me that you love taking pictures.   I remember the time you showed me your picture when you went hiking and fishing too! Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you later! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   I will take my camera. >> Correct! >> OR: I will take my camera with me.Because I want to leave a great tourist attraction. >> Did you mean: It is because I want to take a photo of the great tourist attractions in that place.I also take my comfortable clothes. >> I will also take my comfortable clothes. >> OR: I will also bring the clothes that I am comfortable with.I don\'t want to take uncomfortable clothes. >> Correct! >> OR: I don\'t want to bring the clothes that I am not comfortable with.I will take a map too. >> Correct! Map will help me don\'t get lost. >> The map will help me not to get lost. >> OR: The map will be a guide in order for me not to get lost.And beside,there are many things. >> Did you mean: And besides those things, there are still many items that I will take with me.