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2013-11-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.but 2.but 3.so 4.and 5.or 6.and 7.or 8.but 9.so 10.and Now, I'm very tall!^^ Before that, my height was 143cm.But now,my height is 148.7cm. Oh,yeah! And I'm light now.Before that my weight was 51.5kg.But now my weight is 50.4.

강사 첨삭

A Terrific Thursday afternoon to you my dear Tom ^_^ One more day to go! Are you excited? You just missed one number. ^^ It is okay! I am proud of you! Wow! You grew taller! Just always eat nutritious food to be healthy. See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day! Teacher Nina   1.but >> I like English and I like French very much. 2.but >> Correct! 3.so >> Correct! 4.and >> Correct! 5.or >> Correct! 6.and >> Correct! 7.or >> Correct! 8.but >> Correct! 9.so >> Correct! 10.and >> Correct! Now, I\'m very tall!^^ >> Correct! >> OR: I grew taller.Before that, my height was 143cm.But now,my height is 148.7cm. >> My height before was 143 centimeters but now, it is already 148.7 centimeters. >> OR: My previous height was 143 centimeters but now I am already 148.7 centimeters tall.Oh,yeah! And I\'m light now. >> Yes! I\'m lighter now. >> Better: Yes! I lose weight. Before that my weight was 51.5kg.But now my weight is 50.4. >> My weight before was 51.5 kilograms but now it is 50.4 kilograms. >> OR: My previous weight was 51.5 but now it is 50.4 kilograms.

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