homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.but
2.but
3.so
4.and
5.or
6.and
7.or
8.but
9.so
10.and
Now, I'm very tall!^^
Before that, my height was 143cm.But now,my height is 148.7cm.
Oh,yeah! And I'm light now.Before that my weight was 51.5kg.But now my weight is 50.4.
강사 첨삭
A Terrific Thursday afternoon to you my dear Tom ^_^
One more day to go! Are you excited?
You just missed one number. ^^ It is okay! I am proud of you!
Wow! You grew taller! Just always eat nutritious food to be healthy.
See you in class! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
1.but
>> I like English and I like French very much.
2.but
>> Correct! 3.so
>> Correct! 4.and
>> Correct! 5.or
>> Correct! 6.and
>> Correct! 7.or
>> Correct! 8.but
>> Correct! 9.so
>> Correct! 10.and
>> Correct! Now, I\'m very tall!^^
>> Correct!
>> OR: I grew taller.Before that, my height was 143cm.But now,my height is 148.7cm.
>> My height before was 143 centimeters but now, it is already 148.7 centimeters.
>> OR: My previous height was 143 centimeters but now I am already 148.7 centimeters tall.Oh,yeah! And I\'m light now.
>> Yes! I\'m lighter now.
>> Better: Yes! I lose weight.
Before that my weight was 51.5kg.But now my weight is 50.4.
>> My weight before was 51.5 kilograms but now it is 50.4 kilograms.
>> OR: My previous weight was 51.5 but now it is 50.4 kilograms.
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