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Having close relationship is good. Because the animals are life too. It have consider and mind.We need to take care and have a close relation with our pets. Maybe the pets remember that you don't have a close relationship and it will vengeance to you

A fabulous Friday to you Tom! Thank you for sending this essay.^^ I admire you for using new expressions todday. ^^ Good job! Keep on learning new words and expressions. See you in class! Take Care! Please go over the corrections below. Please explain what you mean wiht this sentence, \" It have consider and mind\" later in class. Teacher Nina   Having close relationship is good. >> Having a close relationship is good. >> OR: Having a close relationship with animals is good.Because the animals are life too. >> It is because animals have life too. >> OR: It is because they are living things too.It have consider and mind. >> Did you mean: They also have a mind and they know how to consider things. >> OR: They are considerate and they also think about things. We need to take care and have a close relation with our pets. >> We need to take good care and have a close relationship with our pets. >> OR: We need to take good care of them and have a good relationship with our pets.Maybe the pets remember that you don\'t have a close relationship and it will vengeance to you >> Maybe pets remember when you don\'t have a close relationship with them and they might do revenge. >> OR: I think pets remember when you don\'t have a good relationship with them and they might hurt you.