homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
1.I looked just like my father, when I was young, but I grew up to resemble my mother.
2. The most important thing my parents taught me is positive attitude.
3. During the summer vacation, my family were in Jeju island for 3 days. We were enjoying a nice day in there.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework! I heard Jeju island is a very beautiful place.
I hope to visit there someday! kkk
-Verna-
1.I looked just like my father, when I was young, but I grew up to resemble my mother.>>Correct
2. The most important thing my parents taught me is positive attitude.
2. The most important thing my parents taught me is positive attitude.
>>The most important thing my parents taught me is to have positive attitude.
3. During the summer vacation, my family were in Jeju island for 3 days. We were enjoying a nice day in there.
3. During the summer vacation, my family were in Jeju island for 3 days. We were enjoying a nice day in there.
>> During summer vacation, my family went to Jeju island for 3 days. We enjoyed the nice days there.
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