homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher nina!
I will buy a new piano book.
There are a lot of song.
And I will play that song.
I'm so exciting.
I love piano.
I will play "Summer"and"spring".
Because,my favorite songs are those song.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Tom!
Really? Wow! I am happy for you!
I know that you are going to play those songs with feelings.
I hope to hear you play the piano someday.
The song played in the movie \"Little Mermaid\" was a bit difficult for me.
I learned that song for a month. Hahaha. How about you?
For how long do you learn a piece/song? Let us talk about it later in class.
See you! Enjoy your day!
Teacher nina!
>> Correct!
>> OR: Teacher Nina, I will buy a new piano book.
>> Correct! There are a lot of song.
>> Did you mean: There are a lot of songs in it.And I will play that song.
>> And I will play those songs.
>> OR: I will play the songs in the book.I\'m so exciting.
>> I\'m so excited.I love piano.
>> Did you mean: I love to play the piano.I will play \"Summer\"and\"spring\".
>> I will play the songs titled \"Summer\" and \"Spring\".Because,my favorite songs are those song.
>> It is because those are my favorite songs.
>> OR: It is because I like those songs.
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