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2013-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Teacher nina! I will buy a new piano book. There are a lot of song. And I will play that song. I'm so exciting. I love piano. I will play "Summer"and"spring". Because,my favorite songs are those song.

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Hi there Tom! Really? Wow! I am happy for you! I know that you are going to play those songs with feelings. I hope to hear you play the piano someday. The song played in the movie \"Little Mermaid\" was a bit difficult for me. I learned that song for a month. Hahaha. How about you? For how long do you learn a piece/song? Let us talk about it later in class. See you! Enjoy your day!   Teacher nina! >> Correct! >> OR: Teacher Nina, I will buy a new piano book. >> Correct! There are a lot of song. >> Did you mean: There are a lot of songs in it.And I will play that song. >> And I will play those songs. >> OR: I will play the songs in the book.I\'m so exciting. >> I\'m so excited.I love piano. >> Did you mean: I love to play the piano.I will play \"Summer\"and\"spring\". >> I will play the songs titled \"Summer\" and \"Spring\".Because,my favorite songs are those song. >> It is because those are my favorite songs. >> OR: It is because I like those songs.

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