Homework

Hi there Ms. [Name]! 

Great noon to you! 

Abraham Lincoln is also most of the answer of my students. 

I don\'t know why but maybe there is something common that you can see on Abraham Lincoln that is why it was your answer. 

Your answers were quite similar and it really depicts who Abraham Lincoln is. 
I hope you were inspired by his story. 

Thanks a bunch for today! 

See you and take care! 

Always, 

Kathrine ^^

A Person You Admire. Who do you admire the most? Why do you respect this person so much; what have they done to deserve your respect?

There are a lot of great people in the world.

>> correct! 

I like reading essay that is about them.

>> I like reading essays about them. 

Especially, when we are little, if we read this books, it will be better.

>> Especially when I was little and if I read this book, it will make me feel better (question:who is \"we\" and \"it\"? What do you mean?)

When I was young, I read biography that is about Abraham Lincoln.

>> When I was young, I have read the biography of Abraham Lincoln. 

He was president in America.

>> He was a president of America. 

He said \'we can learn from all people\'.

>> correct! 

I try to find advantage to all people and I\'d like to see good points.

>> I tried to find the advantage of knowing all people and I\'d like to see the good points. 

Also he is great reader so I found reading has power.

>> He is also a great reader so I found that reading has power. 

Although he failed lots of parts, he never give up.

>> Although he failed on a lot of things, he never gave up. 

Meanwhile, he was poor and had low educational bacground, he became a gread president.

>> In spite of being poor and having a low educational background, he became a great president. 

The emancipation of slaves is his achivement.

>> correct! (spelling correction-achievement)

When I grow up, I read this book again.

>> When I grew up, I read the book again, 

I was impressed with his life, too.

>> correct! 

And then, I think his new mother was good.

>> correct!

>> or: I think that his step-mother was good too. 

She read to him evryday and pray for him.

>> correct!  (spelling correction-everyday)

I\'d like to be a great mother like her.

>> correct!