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2013-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I prefer live in places that have the same climate all year long. Because I want to experience another climate. And when the climate is same, I can adapt to the new climate. How about you? Which do you prefer same climate of change climate?

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Hi Tom! Happy mid-week! Thank you for sending this in! I really admire you for doing your best to enhance your vocabulary skill. Keep it up! Actually, I prefer to live in a place with the same climate all year round but I also want to experience different climates. ^^ I want to see snow, maple trees too. As you know, we only have two seasons in the Philippines, it is summer and rainy season. Please go over the corrections and if you have any questions feel free to ask me in class. See you! Have a fun day! Take Care!Teacher Nina   I prefer live in places that have the same climate all year long. >> Correct!Because I want to experience another climate. >> Correct! >> OR: It is because I want to experience a different climate. >> OR: It is because I want to experience different atmosphere.And when the climate is same, I can adapt to the new climate. >> When the climate is the same all year round, I can adapt it. >> OR: When the climate is the same all year round, I can adjust to it.How about you? >> Correct! Which do you prefer same climate of change climate? >> Did you mean: Which do you prefer, same climate or different climates? >> OR: Which do do your prefer, living in a place with the same climate or with different climates?

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