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2013-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

can 2.shouldn't 3.must 4.Can 5.should 6.must 7.can't It is cold Korea. It was hailing before two days. And it is snowing.It is also raining. There was a big accident because of icy road,9 people died and 2 people had a brain death. There was seven cars.And one of the car crash into another cars. It was rush hour.

강사 첨삭

A cold Thursday afternoon to you Tom! Excellent! You did a great job! I am so proud of you. I think the topic \"Modals\" is really easy for you. Thank you for spending some of your time to do your homework. ^^ I am sorry to hear about the accident. The drivers should be careful when driving to prevent accident. ^^ What other things should the drivers do during winter in order to prevent this situation? Tell me about it later in class! See you! Have a wonderful day! Take Care Always! Teacher Nina   1.can >> CORRECT! 2.shouldn\'t >> CORRECT! 3.must >> CORRECT! 4.Can >> CORRECT! 5.should >> CORRECT! 6.must >> CORRECT! 7.can\'t >> CORRECT! It is cold Korea. >> CORRECT! >> OR: The weather is cold in Korea.It was hailing before two days. >> It hailed two days ago.And it is snowing. It is also raining. >> It snowed and it also rained. >> OR: It snowed and rained two days ago.There was a big accident because of icy road,9 people died and 2 people had a brain death. >> There was a big accident because of the icy road, nine people died and two had brain death. >> OR: There was a big accident on the road and nine people died while two were in a coma.There was seven cars. And one of the car crash into another cars. >> There were seven cars and one of it crashed into the other cars.It was rush hour. >> Did you mean: It happened during the rush hour. >> OR: The accident happened during the rush hour.

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