Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Monday morning Ms. [Name]!
So sorry that I was only able to check your composition.
I went home to my hometown Friday evening so i did not check my page.
I don\'t usually open my page every weekend since I want to enjoy my free time.
Hope you understand.
Anyway, I think your life in a romantic-comedy film would be nice.
But our life is like a movie already.
Sometimes it\'s comedy, romantic, horror, action, etc.
It just depends on what life do we have.
Thanks for today!
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If someone made a movie of your life would it be a drama, a comedy, a romantic-comedy, action film, or science fiction?
Wow. it will be fantastic to me. Hahaha.
>> Wow! It will be fantastic for me. hahaha.
Well, I\'d like that it will be romantic-comedy.
>> correct!
My favorite movie\'s genre is the one.
>> This is my favorite genre of movie.
It is lively and interesting so I will be good the life like that.
>> It is lively and interesting so I will have a good life like that.
I want to live lovely.
>> I want to live lively.
Love is importan in our life.
>> correct! (spelling correction-important)
I\'d like to share with many people such as families, friends and so on.
>> I\'d like to share it with my family, friends and so on.
Our life exist with someone so I think relationship is very important.
>> our life exists with someone so I think that relationship is very important.
Plus, I seek enjoying life.
>> Plus, I seek the enjoyment of life.
I hope there are many happy news around me so I\'d like to smile.
>> correct!
On the other hand, there must be sorrow and pain in romantic-comedy.
>> On the other hand, the must be sorrow and pain in a romantic-comedy.
If there is no these things, movie probably wouldn\'t be much fun.
>> If there are no such things, the movie probably wouldn\'t be so much fun.
Therefore, I will have to overcome this surely.
>> Therefore, I have to overcome this surely.
However. no matter how hard I think, my movie won\'t fun. Hahaha.
Have a nice weekend!
>> correct!
I\'m going to wedding ceremony.
>> I\'m going to a wedding ceremony.
I wish warm wather. Take care:)
>> I wish a warm weather. Take care! :)
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