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2013-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If someone made a movie of your life would it be a drama, a comedy, a romantic-comedy, action film, or science fiction? Wow. it will be fantastic to me. Hahaha. Well, I'd like that it will be romantic-comedy. My favorite movie's genre is the one. It is lively and interesting so I will be good the life like that. I want to live lovely. Love is importan in our life. I'd like to share with many people such as families, friends and so on. Our life exist with someone so I think relationship is very important. Plus, I seek enjoying life. I hope there are many happy news around me so I'd like to smile. On the other hand, there must be sorrow and pain in romantic-comedy. If there is no these things, movie probably wouldn't be much fun. Therefore, I will have to overcome this surely. However. no matter how hard I think, my movie won't fun. Hahaha. Have a nice weekend! I'm going to wedding ceremony. I wish warm wather. Take care:)

강사 첨삭

Great Monday morning Ms. [Name]!

So sorry that I was only able to check your composition. 

I went home to my hometown Friday evening so i did not check my page. 
I don\'t usually open my page every weekend since I want to enjoy my free time. 
Hope you understand. 
Anyway, I think your life in a romantic-comedy film would be nice. 

But our life is like a movie already. 

Sometimes it\'s comedy, romantic, horror, action, etc. 

It just depends on what life do we have. 

Thanks for today! 

See you tomorrow! 


Always, 

Kathrine ^^


If someone made a movie of your life would it be a drama, a comedy, a romantic-comedy, action film, or science fiction?


Wow. it will be fantastic to me. Hahaha.

>> Wow! It will be fantastic for me. hahaha. 

Well, I\'d like that it will be romantic-comedy.

>> correct! 

My favorite movie\'s genre is the one.

>> This is my favorite genre of movie. 

It is lively and interesting so I will be good the life like that.

>> It is lively and interesting so I will have a good life like that. 

I want to live lovely.

>> I want to live lively. 

Love is importan in our life.

>> correct! (spelling correction-important)

I\'d like to share with many people such as families, friends and so on.

>> I\'d like to share it with my family, friends and so on. 

Our life exist with someone so I think relationship is very important.

>> our life exists with someone so I think that relationship is very important. 

Plus, I seek enjoying life.

>> Plus, I seek the enjoyment of life. 

I hope there are many happy news around me so I\'d like to smile.

>> correct! 

On the other hand, there must be sorrow and pain in romantic-comedy.

>> On the other hand, the must be sorrow and pain in a romantic-comedy. 

If there is no these things, movie probably wouldn\'t be much fun.

>> If there are no such things, the movie probably wouldn\'t be so much fun. 

Therefore, I will have to overcome this surely.

>> Therefore, I have to overcome this surely. 

However. no matter how hard I think, my movie won\'t fun. Hahaha. 

>> However, no matter how I think, my movie won\'t be fun. hahaha. 

Have a nice weekend!

>> correct! 

I\'m going to wedding ceremony.

>> I\'m going to a wedding ceremony. 

I wish warm wather. Take care:)

>> I wish a warm weather. Take care! :)

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