homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I disagree with the following statement.
If I want to make different name,my grandfather will mad at me.
It is unfairness.
Some people want something more or something different.
How about you?
Do you agree with the fallowing statement?
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
A majestic Friday to you!
Wow! Thank you for sending an essay today. ^^
You are a diligent student! Keep it up!
I do agree with you because once you are happy with what you have, you feel satisfied.
However, there are people who commit crime because they want something more aside from the things they have. I think we should always be grateful for what we have. Let us talk more about this later in class. See you! Enjoy the rest of the day!
Teacher Nina
I disagree with the following statement.
>> I diasagree with the statement.
>> OR: I am not in favor with the statement.If I want to make different name,my grandfather will mad at me.
>> Did you mean: If I want to use a different name. my grandfather will get mad at me.
>> OR: If I made a differnet name, my grandfather will be angry.It is unfairness.
>> It is being unfair.Some people want something more or something different.
>> Did you mean: Some people want something more and different.
>> OR: Some people want something more and different aside from what they have.
>> OR: Some people want something more because they are not contented with the things they have.How about you?
>> Correct!Do you agree with the fallowing statement?
>> Correct!
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