homework^^
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I can't believe he's already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is.
2. I don't think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have. he might just come for the food.
3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be interested as well.
4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, Icecream can be instead of it.
강사 첨삭
Hello there once again [이름],
Like the usual compositions you made, there are no further corrections noted, but I just want you to look after your different punctuation marks because they play vital role in a paragraph. Anyway, the way you wrote your composition is impressive. Keep up the good work.
-Teacher Verna-
1. I can't believe he's already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is.
>>Correct2. I don't think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have. He might just come for the food.
>>Correct3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be interested as well.
>>Correct4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, Icecream can be instead of it.
>> I feel like having salad. On a second thought, ice cream will be better instead.
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