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2010-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. I can't believe he's already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is. 2. I don't think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have. he might just come for the food. 3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be interested as well. 4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, Icecream can be instead of it.

강사 첨삭

Hello there once again [이름], Like the usual compositions you made, there are no further corrections noted, but I just want you to look after your different punctuation marks because they play vital role in a paragraph. Anyway, the way you wrote your composition is impressive. Keep up the good work. -Teacher Verna-   1. I can't believe he's already a president at such a young age! On a second thought, it makes sense since I know how diligent he is. >>Correct2. I don't think he will come. On a second thought, seeing that he loves the menu we have. He might just come for the food. >>Correct3. Learning another language may be nothing but difficult. On a second thought, it might be interested as well. >>Correct4. I feel like having salad. On a second thought, Icecream can be instead of it. >> I feel like having salad. On a second thought, ice cream will be better instead.

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