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If we try to connect the economic trade with the other countries, the diplomatic relations between Korea and other countries will be easily more improve than other method.When I was trip to the Kazakhstan at the center of Asia region, I had experience to improve the relationship naturally. It was a frist trip to go to there.As soon as, I arrived at the airport, I met the business partner who born in there.We went to the their office by his car. We are not speaking english very well, and we needed to the something to have a conversation breaking the awkward atmosphere.At that time, I found the his phone ‘Galaxy Note’ made by Sam-sung. I also had a same phone ‘Galaxy 2’. The phone made us comfortable relationship and we spoke about each phone such as price, brand awareness and etc. Of course, The relationship of politics and interchange the culture made us good diplomatic relations, but it is hard to link each other deeply. Sometimes, one of the goods easily improve the relationship

Hello there! Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework today. Your concept is very nice. I love it! ^^ Please take time to check my corrections below. ^.^   Teacher Chelsea     If we try to connect the economic trade with the other countries, the diplomatic relations between Korea and other countries will be easily more improve than other method.>>>If we try to connect the economic trade with the other countries, the diplomatic relations between Korea and other countries will be easily more improved than any other methods. When I was trip to the Kazakhstan at the center of Asia region, I had experience to improve the relationship naturally. >>> When I had my trip to Kazakhstan, at the center of Asia region, I had experienced to improve a relationship naturally. It was a frist trip to go to there. >>> It was my first trip going there. OR: It was my first time to go there. As soon as, I arrived at the airport, I met the business partner who born in there. >>> As soon as I arrived at the airport, I met a business partner who was born there. We went to the their office by his car. >>> We went to their office by his car. OR: We went to their office using his car. We are not speaking english very well, and we needed to the something to have a conversation breaking the awkward atmosphere. >>> We did not communicate in english that much, and we needed to do something for conversation to break the awkward atmosphere. At that time, I found the his phone ‘Galaxy Note’ made by Sam-sung. >>>At that time, I found out that his phone was a Galaxy Note by Samsung. I also had a same phone ‘Galaxy 2’. >>>I had the same phone.  The phone made us comfortable relationship and we spoke about each phone such as price, brand awareness and etc. >>>The phone makes our relationship comfortable and we talk about it such as the price, brand awareness and etc...  Of course, The relationship of politics and interchange the culture made us good diplomatic relations, but it is hard to link each other deeply. >>>Did you mean: Of course, the relationship between politics and culture change made our relationship a good diplomatic one, but it\'s still hard to relate each other deeply. Sometimes, one of the goods easily improve the relationship >>>Did you mean: Sometimes, one of the good things we do improves our relationship to others.