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2013-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1.He 2.It 3.They 4.It 5.We 6.They 7.He 8.She 9.She 10.you Yesterday, I read a book about scenario of disaster. Maybe a huge tornado hit Sanfrancisco. Also, Yellowstone National park will erupted. Millions of people will die. Survivor will riot because of food, water and warm thing. How scary!!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom! Happy Monday! It\'s already December! Do you have any special plans for this month? Superb! You started your week right! You made it again! I commend you for being conscious with our sentences. I noticed that you are eager to be corrected and to learn new expressions in English! Keep up the good work! Just keep on learning in order for you to express your thoughts more and your sentences will be meaningful. Please go over the corrections below for your further improvement. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class. See you! Have a great day! Teacher Nina   1.He >> Correct! 2.It >> Correct! 3.They >> Correct! 4.It >> Correct! 5.We >> Correct! 6.They >> Correct! 7.He >> Correct! 8.She >> Correct! 9.She >> Correct! 10.you >> Correct! Yesterday, I read a book about scenario of disaster. >> Yesterday, I read a book about a scenario during a disaster. >> OR: I read a book about the scenarios during a disaster.Maybe a huge tornado hit Sanfrancisco. >> Maybe a huge tornado will hit San Francisco.Also, Yellowstone National park will erupted. >> Also, Yellowstone National park will be damaged. >> OR: Yellowstone National park will be destroyed.Millions of people will die. >> Correct! Survivor will riot because of food, water and warm thing. >> Did you mean: There will be a riot between survivors because of food, water and things needed to feel warm. >> OR: There will be a trouble between survivors because of food, water and things needed to feel warm. >> OR: There will be a commotion because the survivors will ask for food, water and clothes to feel warm.How scary!! >> Correct!

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