Homework
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강사 첨삭
Great Wednesday morning Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Every person has his or her own way of relieving their stress and you also have your own.
We need these things to make our life better.
Stress will kill us if we will not do anything to release it.
It\'s good that you do a lot of things to release your stress.
Keep that up.
See you tomorrow!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What do you do to encourage yourself when going through hard times?
At first, I have to know why I spend hard time.
>> At first, I have to know why I spend a hard time.
This is because I will understand me when I know the reason so I can find the solution.
>> This is because i will understand myself when I know the reason so I can find a solution.
That time, I\'d like to have my time alone so walking is best thing to me.
>> That time, I\'d like to have my time alone so walking is the best thing for me.
While I am walking, I meet myself.
>> While I am walking I can reflect.
After this peace time, I can encourage me.
>> The time is peaceful for me so I can encourage myself.
Also reading is best method, too.
>> Reading is also a best method. (redundant when you use \'also\', and \'to\'.
Sometime I can find the answer of life in the book.
>> correct!
Plus, when I go to church, I can encourage me.
>> Plus, when I go to the church, it can encourage me.
This is because there are great song, word and pray.
>> This is because there are great songs, words and prayers.
Sometime, watching TV, eating delicious and sweet food are good way.
>>
Sometimes, watching TV, eating delicious and sweet food, are good ways.
First of all, I don\'t like busy life.
>> First of all, I don\'t like a busy life.
I need enough free time so weekend is happy time.
>>
I need enough free time so weekend is a happy time.
After weekend, I can have power for work and life.
>>
After weekend, I can have power for work and life.
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