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2013-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.aren't 2.isn't 3.isn't 4.isn't 5.aren't 6.aren't 7.isn't 8.isn't 9.isn't 10.aren't Today, I played "Pomp and Circumstance Marches Nos 1-5,op39with a recorder" The song was grandeur. Our classmates, played that song with a low drum,small drum, melodion and alto recorder. It was marvelous. We felt a shudder.

강사 첨삭

A great Tuesday afternoon Tom! Wow! I hope to hear you play someday. ^^ You are impressive! You got a perfect score! I think this homework is really easy for you, am I right? Please tell me more about this activity later in class. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina   1.aren\'t >> CORRECT! 2.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 3.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 4.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 5.aren\'t >> CORRECT! 6.aren\'t >> CORRECT! 7.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 8.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 9.isn\'t >> CORRECT! 10.aren\'t>> CORRECT! Today, I played \"Pomp and Circumstance Marches Nos 1-5,op39with a recorder\" >> CORRECT!  (Nos, 1-5 op39) >> Better: I played the song titled \" Pop and Circumstance Marches Nos. 1-5 op 39\" with a recorder.The song was grandeur. >> CORRECT! Our classmates, played that song with a low drum,small drum, melodion and alto recorder. >> Our classmates played the song with a bass drum, small drum, melodion and alto recorder. >> OR: Our classmates played it with a bass drum, small drum, melodion and alto recorder.It was marvelous. >> CORRECT! We felt a shudder. >> Did you mean: We shuddered. >> OR: We trembled.

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