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2013-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Juliet

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What is the importance of English in your daily life? English is very important here in Korea. Almost all students from elementary students to university student have to learn english. English has been fundamental to success in their career in Korea. I think it is not necessary for everyone to speak english now that only those who should get involved in business work internationally need english ability. Why I diagree the korean culture that people are enthusiastic about english is that a lot of parents use their money in private english education. Eventually, the english education industry become large and never on the decline. This is big problem of Korea. Several presidents tried to fix it, but whenever they do that, the problem was getting worse.

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Hi there! Good morning Jo! Thank you so much for sending in your homework. You are such an early bird.^^By the way, while it\'s true that being enthusiastic to studying English seems to be a problem for some, it has several advantages especially on the idea of globalization.This seems to be a difficult issue, actually, but you were able to express your stand very well. Very good for that! We\'ll try to talk about this in class later. See you.^^ ~T.Juliet^^   What is the importance of English in your daily life? English is very important here in Korea. >>CorrectAlmost all students from elementary students to university student have to learn english. >>Almost all students from elementary to university have to learn English. English has been fundamental to success in their career in Korea. >>CorrectI think it is not necessary for everyone to speak english now that only those who should get involved in business work internationally need english ability. >>I think it is not necessary for everyone to speakEnglish but only those who should get involved in business work internationally need English ability.Why I diagree the korean culture that people are enthusiastic about english is that a lot of parents use their money in private english education. >>Why I disagree to the Korean culture that people are enthusiastic about English is because a lot of parents use their money in private English education. Eventually, the english education industry become large and never on the decline. >>Eventually, the English education industry becomes large and never on the decline. This is big problem of Korea. >>This is a big problem in Korea. Several presidents tried to fix it, but whenever they do that, the problem was getting worse. >>Several presidents tried to fix it, but whenever they do that, the problem gets worse.  

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